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YourExcellency 25-10-2010 06:16 PM

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Originally Posted by thomas88 (Post 5338690)
Rewarded you 6 points as promised and now you've gain 1 power as you've hit beyond the 35 rep..:p

Keep it burning bro.....don't neglect the bros here :D

Thanks! now how do I use this power? can it get me more FBs?

Joe Fox 25-10-2010 10:42 PM

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nice story n buildup... support 2pts
joe fox

eeemen 26-10-2010 09:07 AM

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Bro TS, I enjoyed reading your story, it flows smoothly and descriptive enough to make me feel part of the flowing story line. Somehow, I feel like I'm in it as well! Well narrated and the pace is just right. Not just wham bang thank you ma'am style of writing. Lots of passion shown. Well done bro. One of the better written story. :D Thanks & cheers bro ..............

simple2kee 26-10-2010 10:05 AM

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1 of the best story tellers around. well, well done! :)

YourExcellency 26-10-2010 11:16 AM

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Originally Posted by Joe Fox (Post 5339610)
nice story n buildup... support 2pts
joe fox

Thanks! But I am running out of time to write... Will find as much time possible from my hectic schedule!

YourExcellency 26-10-2010 11:17 AM

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Originally Posted by simple2kee (Post 5340589)
1 of the best story tellers around. well, well done! :)

Thanks for the praise. Now how do I accumulate as many points as you? :rolleyes:

naturegreen 26-10-2010 01:20 PM

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Very impressive! Well written TS. :p

wthlolol 26-10-2010 07:36 PM

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Well written story!

pary 01-11-2010 11:05 AM

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Bro, we're still waiting for more updates. :o

numb3ers 01-11-2010 11:47 AM

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Very well written xia.

I also bo bian must up you with my humble pts.

edit: cannot up TS points as TS's post is two days old. Hope TS provide us with more updates.

fun_n_pleasure 01-11-2010 04:06 PM

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Wow... this is a very well written story. I like the details of how the romance built up...

Liz is the type of girls I like too, not necessary a stunning beauty but her intelligence and elegant aura makes her a more attractive woman than many of those empty vases out there. I like your style of writing as it demonstrates character and sophistication. There's much I can learn from you in the game of seduction and attraction.

Thumbs up, and looking forward to hearing more from you soon : )

boiboi28 02-11-2010 06:29 AM

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Nice stories, bro. Camping here...

ken_v2 02-11-2010 06:14 PM

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awesome stuff bro. keep going with the story, but don't let your hectic schedule destroy your writing style. i rather wait longer for a good write up then one that is badly done due to insufficient time.

looking forward.

YourExcellency 03-11-2010 01:33 AM

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Originally Posted by Joe Fox (Post 5339610)
nice story n buildup... support 2pts
joe fox

THanks for the points, very much appreciated!

YourExcellency 03-11-2010 01:35 AM

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Originally Posted by eeemen (Post 5340461)
Bro TS, I enjoyed reading your story, it flows smoothly and descriptive enough to make me feel part of the flowing story line. Somehow, I feel like I'm in it as well! Well narrated and the pace is just right. Not just wham bang thank you ma'am style of writing. Lots of passion shown. Well done bro. One of the better written story. :D Thanks & cheers bro ..............

THanks for the compliment... it flows because im trying my best to write in chronological order... i feel chronological details are the hardest to sort out when it comes to recollecting past events!


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