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Old 25-05-2015, 06:19 PM
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Re: A short story 2

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As the song was ending she crawled forward and types

"You better surprise me or else... Heehee", and then she logs off...

To be continued
The rest of the days passed without much activity or excitement for me nor from her, I continued to settle the logistics required to surprise her from where I was, and before long I was on the flight back.

Landed at 1600 and proceeded home to drop my luggage, get a shower and head out to collect the various items I had pre-ordered for the surprise.

It was around 9pm when i finished all my errands, and i arrived at the mscp below her place. I went to scout around and started laying the sparklers I had managed to get from a party supplies store at various locations, praying it wouldn't rain, I got ready my sling bag which was now filled with rose petals.

Finally when everything was laid in place at 10pm I called her. That familiar and sweet yet womanly voice picked up. Are you ready for your surprise? Come out of your house and follow the petals.

It was a race against time as I had to scatter the petals and be ahead of her. I got a headstart and led her toward the lift. I had pasted a note in the lift that said go down beforehand and I had to race down to the 1st floor, thankfully she stayed on the 6th floor.

Once I got down before her, the petals continued falling, and now I had to light the sparklers toward the bbq area. Basically it was quite a funny sight if you saw me running and lighting sparklers and dropping flower petals, and finally hid myself behind the shelter to wait for her.

Finally when she reached the shelter next to the bbq area, she saw what I had left there, a picnic basket with chilled wine, chocolates, and her favourite sushi platter. She was grinning and obviously very amused, and then I came out of my hiding place and grabbed her from behind.

She squealed and then turned around and hopped onto me, literally grabbing my like she was a koala, and I caught her familiar scent as our lips met, and parted, and our tongues wrestled. We frenched for what seemed like an eternity, then I asked her, "surprised?"

She smiled and said "not bad, guess i will have to do better later for your surprise"

to be continued