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Originally Posted by Frankenstein77
No missing part. Apologies for the confusion. I was trying to write it like a drama script. It's just a changing of the scene where the episode started with the scene of Mark and Xinni already back home, bathed and nestling with each other in bed.
I will take note of such again if it is too confusing.
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It took me a while to get it too.
Maybe you should start with a "Few hours later..." spongebob style.
Also took me a while to get that this was fiction. I was thinking damn..this aircon guy can write really well...