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My First Crush
Hi peeps! Time for me to contribute to society. This is a story I think many of us can relate to. The story of how my heart was first broken.
![]() I was born into an English ed family so my parents were very liberal and didn't force me to study. I was in an all boys school from P1 to Sec3 when I didn't do very well and was forced to "donate" ![]() And so began my first day in Sec 4 in a coed neighbourhood school. ![]() |
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Re: My First Crush
pitching tent.... seems like something exciting about to happen
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camp for more...
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nice upzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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I was posted to one of the 'better' classes as I took pure science. And only this class offered my subject combi.
I spent the first half of the day completing the paperwork bullshit and was brought to class only after recess. My from teacher, Ms Teo, walked in with me and introduced me. I took a quick scan around looking for a guy a could probably hang out with. I wasn't really good with girls at that time. I just wanted a friend to break me in. I started at the back rows where the boys were and worked my way forward while Ms Teo was rambling on about why this idiot was transferred here blah blah blah. And then I saw her. I will never forget the feeling I had the moment I first laid eyes on her. Roughly 155cm tall, shoulder length hair tied into a ponytail with a short fringe to the left, thin black rimmed specs. I was mesmerized. |
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My writing not good enough? No sappork?
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camping here bro
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My suggestion to you try to writer longer! ur story simply too short... just a few sentence only cannot make much ppl interested...
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it takes time to gain some fame here bro....
be patient, and your fan base will grow upz u my humble 5 points, keep it going... |
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Thanks bros for the advice! I try to make it better.
After introducing me, Ms Teo made everyone introduce themselves. I took a mental note of 3 girls: Huiyun 158 choir, Cindy 165 netball, and the girl of my dreams Peiqi also netball. The first day passed uneventfully and I left school immediately when the bell rang. As luck would have it, the first 2 periods on the second day was PE and I wasn't prepared thanks to blurcock Ms Teo who forgot to give me the timetable on my first day. I had to buy a set of PE attire while the class changed and went to the field for games. I changed before I went back to class to put my stuff and I saw something I shouldn't have. |
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The classroom was totally empty except for 1 guy squatting beside Cindy's seat. He was rummaging through her bag. I hid beside the door waiting to see what he was doing.
Then I saw him pull out a pink Nike sports bra. He brought it to his nose and sniffed it while using the other hand to rub himself. FUCK!!! I didn't know whether to bust him or just walk away. After about a minute I decided it was safer to buah bodoh. I walked away then coughed fucking loudly while slowly making my way back to class. As I entered the classroom he was back at his seat fumbling through his own bag. (Did he steal her bra???) Me: Eh, you still here ah? I thought you all go down already. Jie: No lah. Mr Chan say cannot wear non sports watch to PE so must put mine back lor. He damn one kind lah. Like to act pro only. Anyway, I'm Weijie. Me: *shook his hand* I'm Chris. Nice to meet you. Jie: I know lah. Yesterday Ms Teo say already. Didn't get lost walking to the bookshop right? This place damn small lah. You don't look stupid enough to get lost. Hahaha... Me: Haha... I made it back to class right? Anyway we better go down lah. Mr Chan so one kind better not be too late for his class. Jie: Not bad ah. You learn fast. See who last lor. Me: Eh! What?? Weijie disappeared out of class in a flash. I threw my stuff on my seat and chased after him after taking one last look at Cindy's seat. Where is her bra now? ![]() |
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Nice update bro
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Story will be discontinued do to lack of interest.
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How will there be interest when you have not really reached the interesting bits?
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TS also one kind.. Just keep writing.. If it's good, the interest will manifest. |
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