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My Fantasy Dream
Inspired by a dream I had of late, I hv decided to pen it down, wh is part fiction. It's my first try at penning genre of such, pl be kind and offer suggestions as to how the story can unfold. As much as I enjoy some of the stories here, I will try to contribute my first entry here, hopefully it can endure more than one. Story is written from 1st POV n addressing my 'partner'.
**************************************** You were with me and my tween daughter as we arrived at an old place, presumably my house. What has become of my house and when has my kitchen been stripped of its modernities, I gasped inwardly. My gaze turned to the charcoal stove on which a vessel of food was heated as thoughts of how to use it raced through my mind. Who has been cooking and expecting my return? My tween, in her pale-green secondary school uniform, who needed to take a bath broke my train of thoughts. Turning to her, I looked into her eyes, that unfamiliar mature glint, as she chattered on. Once again, I drifted into my thoughts while assessing her grown up face, nodding away to conceal my perplexed state. The tween seems more like my ex-student than my daughter, I swallowed a lump in my throat. Caressing her hair, I gently nudged her to take a bath, gesturing that lunch would await her afterwards. Seemingly oblivious to my uneasiness, you were seated on a stool, watching and waiting for me. Just as my tween was about to enter the bathroom, you sneaked from behind, with arms on my hips, kissing me affectionately. My tween was shell-shocked and your bold action shocked me too. My heart skipped a beat. My tween is going to tell on me, I thought. A look of awkward disgust spread over her face. Momentarily, she stood there, stunned, before hurrying into the bathroom and closing the door with a resounding click. You appeared nonchalant and signaled me to go to the bedroom with you. Anxiety crept up on me as I stared at the stove which I was clueless how I could watch over the flames whilst attending to you. I mouthed, "But we don't have much time." You insisted that the time we had was the time my tween was bathing. How possibly can we have enough time, for you to play with my things and then with me, I thought again. My mind was engulfed in swirls of perplexity and confusion at the alarming changes that I had experienced. The only constant, being you and me, and the state we were in. Before I could respond, I felt your arms wrap around my waist as you led me out of the kitchen. Still reeling from the disorientation, the spinning world before me took on a salmon-pink hue as I took in your warm scent. Ah, that fruity whiff of essential oil tinged with your sweaty tanned masculinity. Straining to keep my feet on the ground, I turned to face you, intending to reiterate the lack of time. Your warmth permeated through my cotton blouse as you swept your arms from my waist upwards to hold me closer. Our eyes met. I could see my intense longing burning in your eyes. Your face, inches away. I could feel you breathe. You parted your soft lips as if to inhale the moment. I bit my lips. Pulling you closer towards me, i shyly inched forward and kissed you. The moment our lips touched, I closed my eyes. As our kisses skirted on the outside, we pulled each other closer. Our lips then parted, tasting each other. Eagerly. Uninhibitedly. I arched backwards as you pinned me against the wall of the living room, with our tongues locked in passion. I gripped onto your hips firmly as if bracing for another avalanche of intense frenching. As you leaned against my body, I could feel the bulge growing through your jeans. A warm glow of arousal spread across my groins, while I tasted you vigorously. Then, a pause. We caught our breath. Holding my face in your hands, you brushed away the strands of my hair and smiled gently at me. "Come," I whispered, flushed from the intense closeness as I held your hands and led you into my bedroom. |
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Re: My Fantasy Dream
Camping
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Re: My Fantasy Dream
Camping too
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Re: My Fantasy Dream
2nd to support .
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Re: My Fantasy Dream
Camping for more.. up u.
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Re: My Fantasy Dream
T.Q. sis !...A very good attempt to write & share yr fantasies from a dream with us !
![]() Happen to pass by & stopping here to give u moral support, sis !!...sounds steamy & getting exciting !! ![]() ![]()
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MIN to EXC > POWER...4 Up my points n I will return immediately Pls PM me if I haven return favor |
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Re: My Fantasy Dream
Thank you all, yr support spurs me to write on when I'm having a writer's block.
Rickey, thanx for yr kind words. I nv know too. I guess, my experience fuels my writing as well ![]() |
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MIN to EXC > POWER...4 Up my points n I will return immediately Pls PM me if I haven return favor |
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Re: My Fantasy Dream
TS, please continue story. We support you
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TS please continue ......
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Camping here for more
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Re: My Fantasy Dream
Thanx peeps, will get to writing soon. Bn busy lately. Suggestions r welcomed. As it's only part fiction, I'll keep it as authentic as possible.
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Re: My Fantasy Dream
Yeah TS! when you have time for us, do continue your fantasies!
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Re: My Fantasy Dream
Waiting for next juicy part.
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Hey, it's been a crazy week and I can continue jus a wee bit.
---------------------------------------- We stepped into the dim familiarity of the master bedroom, the heavy curtains fully drawn except for a faint stream of sunlight that filtered through louvered windows of the adjoining bathroom. Amid the oddly dated furnishings, there was a sense of déjà vu that we had been here, several times before. My attention shifted to the wardrobe and the drawer that lay within it. I resisted the urge to pull out the drawer to check. Are the things that lay within mine? I knew you would want to explore the drawer privately, as usual and me checking it will ruin the thrill for you. "Make yourself comfortable," I said quietly, trying to avert my gaze from the wardrobe. I felt your strong arms clasp around my waist, drawing me closer and I was once again lost in your aura of musky-scented warmth. Planting soft kisses on my eyes, eyebrows and my cheeks, you paused to hold my fragile face in your hands and smiled that enigmatic smile which always had me questioning before my rationality was relinquished by the light frenching. "You can't seem to let me go," you teased, stroking my arms to which i coyly bit my lips. I nodded. An unspoken silence which we both knew what you wanted. |
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