[Story] Rivalry

[Oneiros]

Qualifiers:
1) This is a work of fiction. Names, characters, places and incidents either are products of the author’s imagination or are used fictitiously. Any resemblance to actual events or locales or persons, living or dead, is entirely coincidental.

2) I have checked spelling and grammatical errors to the best of my abilities. My main motivation is to concentrate and tighten the story line with the secondary objective of editing spelling and grammar

3) I humbly present to you:

Rivalry
Chapter 1: Invitation with Hidden Agenda

My name is Ruth; a first-year student and I am with the Dragon Boat team in XYZ JC. My senior, Gan Siong whom I have a crush on was into his second year and vice-captain of our JC’s Dragon Boat team. I know of one girl whom was not in the Dragon Boat team but also has a crush on Gan Siong.

Her name, Yi Yern, a dainty lady with long flowy hair who was never afraid to show too much skin in all her clothings. I even heard that guys both in JC 1 and even seniors were naturally attracted to her since she came into our JC. Although it remained to be seen whether they were interested in her or the skin that she constantly presented in all the clothes she wore.

I on the other hand was a little tom boyish with short hair since I was with the Dragon Boat team. In fact, the muscles on my biceps were quite visible from the vigorous training I put myself through. Hell, I even have faint outline of six packs on my tummy. I also sport a healthy tan. Gan Siong too was a huge muscular dude with a very tan body from years of training in the Dragon Boat team. Despite his impressive muscles, Gan Siong was a shy and timid young male who has not had any BGR experiences before.

One day, after completing a 2.4km run as part of my training; I saw Gan Siong flashed a thumbs up to me from the corner. He had also joined the group for the run. He like the rest of the males have removed their tops and was glistering with sweat. I couldn’t take my eyes off him. As he spoke to the rest of the Dragon Boat team members, I could see his pecs moving and contracting, as if he was doing it on purpose.

Suddenly, from a far, a girl approached the team. She was unlike the rest of the team members. We were all sweaty and tired with many of the girls with dishevelled hair. She was dressed in our school uniform although her skirt was way too short. I was surprised she was not caught or maybe she was but she didn’t bother to do anything about it.

Some of the guys quickly put on their tops; seeing someone from outside of the team was amongst them.

Yi Yern looked at Gan Siong flirtatiously and exclaimed a "Wow," as the latter was fumbling to put on his top. She then walked towards me.

"Hey Ruth, the term break is coming, you wanna go Bintan for a short break?"

[madpig88]

Thanks for sharing this nice story TS, look forward to your next updates.

[maddoff]

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Thank you for sharing nice story.

[Istimewa]

Nice sharing bro, looking forward to your next updates.

[i^Xi0n]

interesting and nicely written story TS, great share and please do keep it going.

[talkshow]

Nice story and interesting start,
Please post more.

[forbe]

Well done TS.
Wish to read more updates pls.

[Pride]

please carry on

[Mickeyhitaryan]

Ts , great story and pls share more.

[FeelJones]

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[hardintongue]

Great start TS, camping here for more!

[meijipcc]

great story, enjoy reading it. look forward to your next update TS.

[NastyThaiboy]

this is a nice story!

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[VVDBlues]

Nice start, please continue bro.

[KnowItAll]

like this story very much... it's very nice... share more soon please...