My Mother, May. - Page 10

DDAMn · #**136** 12-09-2013, 08:29 PM

Yummy can't wait for update .thanks bro.

cpgoer · #**137** 12-09-2013, 11:22 PM

camping for updates!

KiaLaiKiaKe · #**138** 13-09-2013, 12:00 PM

Very nice story bro , upped you

DDAMn · #**139** 13-09-2013, 04:04 PM

Waitin patiently for bro pyro update.

pyrokinets · #**140** 13-09-2013, 08:22 PM

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Originally Posted by DDAMn

Waitin patiently for bro pyro update.

Ahah... didn't really write anything this afternoon. Sorry guys. I usually have multiple social activities on the weekends.

thingshappen · #**141** 14-09-2013, 04:16 AM

very nice story!

erkianpeng · #**142** 14-09-2013, 05:32 AM

Story started promisingly but have gone haywire with group sex and ridiculous twists just to keep the story alive.

IwantbustyKim · #**143** 14-09-2013, 09:25 AM

Go out relax and have fun fun. Write at your own pace TS

Hardstick15by5 · #**144** 14-09-2013, 09:44 AM

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Originally Posted by erkianpeng

Story started promisingly but have gone haywire with group sex and ridiculous twists just to keep the story alive.

Maybe you should try someday? Try and top this story? Don't talk big lah keyboard warrior

nihonjin · #**145** 14-09-2013, 11:10 AM

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Originally Posted by IwantbustyKim

Go out relax and have fun fun. Write at your own pace TS

I second that. Good things are worth waiting for.

Excellent story so far!

pyrokinets · #**146** 14-09-2013, 12:42 PM

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Originally Posted by erkianpeng

Story started promisingly but have gone haywire with group sex and ridiculous twists just to keep the story alive.

Well... yeah, kinda. I'm writing for the sake of writing. Wanted to see how far I could take it. This is definitely not the wham, bam, thank you mam kind of story.

masters · #**147** 14-09-2013, 01:26 PM

Keep it up. Have up you 9 smacking points

erkianpeng · #**148** 14-09-2013, 03:45 PM

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Originally Posted by pyrokinets

Well... yeah, kinda. I'm writing for the sake of writing. Wanted to see how far I could take it. This is definitely not the wham, bam, thank you mam kind of story.

Glad you agree. Do think more about the storyline instead of coming out with twists just to prolong the story. End it if necessary and start another story.

erkianpeng · #**149** 14-09-2013, 03:46 PM

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Originally Posted by Hardstick15by5

Maybe you should try someday? Try and top this story? Don't talk big lah keyboard warrior

Me no keyboard warrior lah. I write for a living.

pyrokinets · #**150** 14-09-2013, 10:13 PM

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Originally Posted by erkianpeng

Glad you agree. Do think more about the storyline instead of coming out with twists just to prolong the story. End it if necessary and start another story.

Not that I don't know where you're coming from, but I didn't exactly set out to pen a masterpiece here. This isn't a planned novel or anything. It's just an exercise to keep my thoughts flowing. Like you, I write for a living, and to minimize the chances of succumbing to a full onset of the dreaded writer's block, I set aside a few hours a day to do some frivolous writing, like this story here. As such, I like to experiment, try out new ideas, or even just go nuts sometimes with this story, which, I'm afraid, results in a rather bumpy plot.